The animation was sparse and low quality, especially for a clock animation. (e.g.: The dumping into the pipes after the workers had left and the slow, lethargic movements of the characters) This is specifically terrible, since they need no expression or body language. The music did not fit too well with the situations, and the dialogue was at different volume levels so it went from overpowering to barely audible. The accents were over-the-top and that took your attention away from the overall magic of the animation. I expected a lot more. The plot arc was ok, but it could have been better. Next time, try putting in a conflict that the main characters have to overcome. As it was, it seemed more like an informative pamphlet than an entertaining story. On the other hand, the art was well put together and very high quality; so I'm not saying that you don't have ANY talent, but you should work on improving your work in the other aspects of an animation. You have potential, I can tell, but keep working at perfection before you make another flash. I want to vote you higher, but I'm not voting on what the animation could be, I have to vote on how it is now. 2/2 and Good lcuk