fetch300's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Space Duck]

I hardly every give anything high marks; but you, sir, never fail to impress me with the fluidity, quality, imagination, and hilarity you put into your work. The ability to express yourself through multiple forms is the mark of a true artistic genius. You have a style in art, animation, and music that is wholly your own. I respect you for that. Now, about this flash in particular, I noticed straightaway the amount of work it must have taken to make this a reality. As someone who dabbles in animation myself, I realize how much effort it takes to draw every single detail of every frame over and over, ESPECIALLY if you're animating multiple aspects at once. Nevertheless, you tackled those obstacles stupendously! The quality of this didn't degrade with time; showcasing your ability to pace yourself, to keep yourself from burning out. I commend you for that aspect as well. Also, I REcommend this flash for anyone interested in amorphous animations and loops.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks a lot!

[Love the Nukes]

The animation was sparse and low quality, especially for a clock animation. (e.g.: The dumping into the pipes after the workers had left and the slow, lethargic movements of the characters) This is specifically terrible, since they need no expression or body language. The music did not fit too well with the situations, and the dialogue was at different volume levels so it went from overpowering to barely audible. The accents were over-the-top and that took your attention away from the overall magic of the animation. I expected a lot more. The plot arc was ok, but it could have been better. Next time, try putting in a conflict that the main characters have to overcome. As it was, it seemed more like an informative pamphlet than an entertaining story. On the other hand, the art was well put together and very high quality; so I'm not saying that you don't have ANY talent, but you should work on improving your work in the other aspects of an animation. You have potential, I can tell, but keep working at perfection before you make another flash. I want to vote you higher, but I'm not voting on what the animation could be, I have to vote on how it is now. 2/2 and Good lcuk

RadioTubeClock responds:

I'll work on adding more movement and animation in my future stuff, it was a bit tricky here given the amount of detail I had put into stuff. Another clock with some experience in audio stuff is going to help me balance the levels of voices in the future so hopefully that will help with that.

I was aiming at having this be like an informative pamphlet advocating the benefits of nukes while actually showing the various dangers of them. I'll admit that some of this could have been better paced although I wanted to vary it from some of my other movies in which there is not a clearly defined conflict to overcome but more so a concept.

Making flashes and submitting them is the way I improve, I intend to keep making stuff while keeping in the mind the responses to my existing work to further improve myself. So far it's worked quite well. Thanks for the review.

[Thank you Edd.]

It's videos like these that make me ache all the more for your existence. You were a growing artist with a blooming passion and desire for perfecting your art. Your future was bright, your jokes witty, and your talent impeccable. You will be dearly missed. Fare thee well, Edd. I thought he'd win. I hoped he'd win. We all did.

Yusuf responds:

We sure did.

[Bedtime Story]

Awe. SOME!!!

Make a game! Make A GAMEE!!!

CircusFreakFlash responds:

im workin on it :D